Tag: Black Ice

Giarratano glitches

She is so heavily hyped by our crime writing cliques that it is a pity Leah Giarratano is not better edited.
The simple editing oversights in Black Ice (bought off the remainder table for $9.95!) leap off the page.
Two examples: at the end of chapter 14, Scott Hutchinson becomes Scotty and then Scottie in the space of four lines and, in chapter 22, we get Jill wanting to reign in her temper.
Oh dear!